Write Feedback Comments for Student Work

Write constructive feedback comments for student work in the following context:

Subject / assignment type: [e.g. essay / project / code submission / presentation / creative work]
Level: [secondary school / undergraduate / postgraduate / professional training]
Assessment criteria: [list the criteria being assessed]
Student work description: [describe the work or paste a section of it]
Grade / performance level: [e.g. strong / average / struggling / failing]

For each piece of student work, provide feedback that:

Structure:
1. Opening: acknowledge what they did well (specific, not generic)
2. Core feedback (2–3 key points): the most important improvements — each with:
   - What the issue is
   - Why it matters
   - A concrete suggestion for how to improve
3. One stretch goal: something for a student doing well to push further
4. Closing: forward-looking encouragement based on their specific work

Rules:
- Be specific — "good analysis" is useless; "your comparison of X and Y in paragraph 3 effectively demonstrates…" is useful
- Don't overwhelm — choose the 2–3 most impactful things, not every issue
- Link feedback to the learning objective
- Write in a tone that motivates rather than demoralises